The Moon
Can you not?
Sometimes he is a skull, old and blind and dead, an idiot god grinning stupid and cruel down at the earth, wishing for a body.
(I wrote a poem about this years ago. It envisioned the moon growing body and raping the earth. I have long since lost it; nobody much liked it but me.)
And sometimes a woman, pale and lovely and cold and cruel. Observing but indifferent.
What strange minds live within her cold light?
And the skull Man walked upon, that pretended to be a desert?
The moon, pale and lovely and cold and cruel.
Bajo la luna gitana,
las cosas le estan mirando
y ella no puede mirarlas.
And here is my own much less worthy (in fact, somewhat embarrassing) contribution.
(If I were to rewrite it today, I would delete most of the beginning and simply write, "It is a thousand years later, and the old man steps out of the shadows." None of this business about Pittsburgh or little girls or first-person narration. The point of the story is the riddle, can you guess it?)
Pale and lovely and cruel and cold. And old, and blind, and dead.
Thursday, June 12, 2008
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Answer: The moon and Earth?
I thought it was interesting you made the moon masculine and the sun feminine in your linked story.
In your blog piece I am sure it's the earth that is old and blind! It cannot be the sun because we cannot live without it.
The earth goes on though unawares of troubles.
If I am wrong please tell me.
anyway
I found a poem about the moon I thought you might like.
http://www.cs.berkeley.edu/~richie/poetry/html/poem110.html
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